After finishing my first draft I feel I learned a lot about my subject. Having a person I personally knew as a community partner helped a great deal to offer a hands on perspective. My sentence outline was extremely helpful but I didn’t follow it to the letter. I found it better to rearrange certain things as well as add and subtract things where I needed to emphasize a new point that was clearer than a previous statement I was going to make. All together I think I ended up working on this project for about 10 hours.